PDI: This season the club has introduced, for the first time an intermediate group. This is were I start the season. Objective - one ten!
Frozen Flower: A set of nine images - taken using my macro lens - with the idea of focus stacking. I'm not sure if I really have the hang of this technique yet but willing to experiment some more. Flower from the garden - frozen. Taken on top of a light box so bleached a little. A suitable crop will be needed.
Frozen Flower: First draft - stacked in PS (CC), cropped - and then imported into LR for colour adjustment. I enjoy this image. I liked 'creating' the image. Freezing the flower will give you a different result each time. On this, my first time of freezing - I froze three different types of flowers - being careful to label in case D mistook them for his tea!! This was by far the most successful. I particularly like the 'crack' just off centre - however I suspect the judge will consider that distracting.
Frozen Flower: Final - just experimenting one step further - I have added a warm sunset filter to the image using Nik Colour Effect. I very much like the warmth it has added to the image. I truly think this is a marmite image. You either like it or don't.
Ps. A tip - when using water in photography - generally tap water does not give great results. Carbonated water is better for bubbles and this - ionised water, gives great 'extra long' bubbles.
Judges Comments: Interesting and very different, but actually very little to the image. Love the colour palette. Very pleasing image. Bit more clarity required in the centre. Score: 9.5
Emerged: Taken at the NHM Butterfly House, through glass. I very much like the whole image but the moth/butterfly on the far right just isn't sharp enough to include. So a good crop.
Emerged: Final Draft. Cropped (with a small amount of cloning on left) and clarity turned up a bit. Shadows and highlights slightly adjusted. In looking at this image closely - once again my DoF is way off - it's not sharp all over. Really need to sort this issue now - have 'invested' in an off camera flash - but on this occasion this wouldn't have helped as taken through glass.
Judges Comments: Beautiful to see. Focus is where is should be - on the insect and the cocoons. Detail in the image is interesting. Crop works well - although too close on the left and right hand side. More space would have improved the image. Score: 9.5
Frozen Flower would get a 10 every time if I were the judge.
ReplyDeleteBlimey 2x 9.5 - wont be long till you get that 10! ...unless D eats your project for tea that is!
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